Amobi And The Door Beyond Time

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Frostyella

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The plot and setting were out of this world, as every fantasy book is expected to be. But what made it more exceptional was the fact that the narration made it all seem realistic.

7 comment[s] in part 1

	paul It was: I really need to pee.... Oh Lord. Smh Sunday, 10 Nov, 2019 08:04AM
	paul “Why won’t you stand still so I can kill you?” he complained, sounding genuinely confused. ... I off 🤔😂😂😂 Sunday, 10 Nov, 2019 07:59AM
	paul The guard let go of me and began to walk, knowing that I would follow. I’ll admit, the thought of fleeing did occur to me, but where would I run to? The other guards at the gate would simply hand me b... Ha. Nawa o Sunday, 10 Nov, 2019 07:52AM
	drea20 Damnnnn Saturday, 09 Nov, 2019 18:10PM
	drea20 Damnnnn Saturday, 09 Nov, 2019 18:10PM
	drea20 I groaned and sat up. My ribs were on fire and I was pretty sure I had broken at least one of them. The rhino was snorting, rifling through the spot where I’d been a few moments ago. Of course, I thou... Intense! Saturday, 09 Nov, 2019 18:09PM
	frostyella I know, I know. That sounds really bad. Who blows up a church for crying out loud? But I assure you, I am neither a Satanist, nor am I an ISIS terrorist. Like everything horrible that has ever happene... Rereading this cause I can💃 Saturday, 09 Nov, 2019 18:04PM

1 comment[s] in part 6

paul “Daydreams for sale,” he called out. “Only thirty cowries for an hour’s worth!”... 😏 Wednesday, 13 Nov, 2019 18:08PM

2 comment[s] in part 3

	paul I may or may not have wet my trousers.... Lol. Smh 😂😂😂 Sunday, 10 Nov, 2019 10:38AM
	paul “Take this wheel as the universe and its movement as the energy that keeps everything in order. Remove just one spoke from the wheel and the bicycle will keep on running just as fine. But you’ve creat... 🤔 Sunday, 10 Nov, 2019 10:15AM

1 comment[s] in part 22

imaginaryfriend This is a very interested book. I've always had a taste for Nigerian mythology and this was nicely done. I loved the humour but the book seems like a merge between Percy Jackson and the Kane chronicles. Saturday, 23 Nov, 2019 07:05AM

2 comment[s] in part 4

	paul “The building. It has a name you know.” Francis stared at me like this should have perfectly obvious.... 😂 Sunday, 10 Nov, 2019 10:52AM
	paul Sometimes life is like a swimming pool, calm and gentle and peaceful. It sparkles beautifully in the sunlight, inviting you in. But then, that weird uncle that eats way too many sardines and makes sad... I know the feeling 😂 Sunday, 10 Nov, 2019 10:46AM

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brokedarkpoet Anticipate 🔥🔥 Saturday, 14 Sep, 2019 00:00AM

5 comment[s] in part 2

	paul Kosi, I.K and I stared. "Well," I said finally. "I guess we have no choice but to obey the floating head."... 😂😂😂😂 Sunday, 10 Nov, 2019 08:29AM
	paul "Your friends," it frowned, then slapped a hand against its forehead. "I can't believe I almost forgot them. Hang on." It snapped its fingers and the world turned upside down. I had the weird sensatio... Wow Sunday, 10 Nov, 2019 08:21AM
	paul "Chi!" it repeated, growing more and more outraged when it was obvious I didn't have a clue what it was talking about. "I am your Chi. You know, personal god, guardian etc."... He he. This is getting better and better Sunday, 10 Nov, 2019 08:18AM
	paul Kosi opened his mouth to say something but I.K quickly interrupted. "How about we walk and talk at the same?" he begged. "That matron is giving us the evil eye." I turned to see the old crone stalking... 😂 Sunday, 10 Nov, 2019 08:14AM
	imaginaryfriend This is a truly amazing story line though I feel the use of english is quite apt Saturday, 09 Nov, 2019 21:25PM

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