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3am Thoughts

3am Thoughts

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Just like the seas It is deep; extending far down from what you see at the surface. It is calm; With silent whispers it speaks to you. It is raging; An uncontrolled anger that could bring you d...

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Just like the seas
It is deep;
extending far down from what you see at the surface.
It is calm;
With silent whispers it speaks to you.
It is raging;
An uncontrolled anger that could bring you down.

It is our 3am thoughts.


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1 comment[s] in part 11

lola
Nice, but the title doesn't fit
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM

1 comment[s] in part 12

lola
Great piece.

"Tears no longer becomes me
Fears no longer bothers me" - that line got me

Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM

3 comment[s] in part 5

moyin
this is beautifully expressive, lucid and enthralling, good work, improve on your imagery though, good work
Friday, 21 Dec, 2018 00:00AM
_okoyeobinna
Thanks Lola. I appreciate your comment. It means a lot to me
Sunday, 16 Dec, 2018 00:00AM
lola
You didn't punctuate the poem properly, but it's beautiful
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM

6 comment[s] in part 13

husnah_hussain
Beautiful! I love this
Sunday, 16 Dec, 2018 00:00AM
ibreathemagic
Beautiful ! I like the diction and narration . Keep it up !
Sunday, 16 Dec, 2018 00:00AM
alphawolf28
This rather an amazing way to tell a story of abuse through poetry (narrative poem).

Subject matter -
Like I always say, “a poet is one that can say what everyone is saying in an artistic way” and that is exactly what the poet did.

Abuse in marriage, one that is seen as normal by the society (this can be seen by the person’s mom's constant use of "a woman must be patient”), is very common subject almost every knows and talks about but the poet showed his/her artistic gifts by presenting this topic is a very unique way.

First the use of a narrative poetry. The story is very sad come to think of it and the poet has presented in a way that all throughout the reading, the reader will be convinced to empathize with these women who go through such abuse in marriage.

The effect - although the poet didn't suggest a way out of this ordeal should anyone find themselves in one neither did she bring a happy ending but with how is it presented, anyone who reads it finds a sense of relief (if they are in an abuse marriage themselves) or an urge to help do something about this issue.

That's a unique art the poet portrayed there.


Diction - the words in the poem couldn’t have been said in any different way than it was said.
The words were fit for the poem - not too difficult and not too simple which is ok for the kind of audience the message of the poem is directed to.

Grammar - There is no grammatical mistakes as far as my knowledge in grammar will allow me to see. It is beautifully written with no grammatical error.

In all, great poetry.
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM
alphawolf28
This rather an amazing way to tell a story of abuse through poetry (narrative poem).

Subject matter -
Like I always say, “a poet is one that can say what everyone is saying in an artistic way” and that is exactly what the poet did.

Abuse in marriage, one that is seen as normal by the society (this can be seen by the person’s mom's constant use of "a woman must be patient”), is very common subject almost every knows and talks about but the poet showed his/her artistic gifts by presenting this topic is a very unique way.

First the use of a narrative poetry. The story is very sad come to think of it and the poet has presented in a way that all throughout the reading, the reader will be convinced to empathize with these women who go through such abuse in marriage.

The effect - although the poet didn't suggest a way out of this ordeal should anyone find themselves in one neither did she bring a happy ending but with how is it presented, anyone who reads it finds a sense of relief (if they are in an abuse marriage themselves) or an urge to help do something about this issue.

That's a unique art the poet portrayed there.


Diction - the words in the poem couldn’t have been said in any different way than it was said.
The words were fit for the poem - not too difficult and not too simple which is ok for the kind of audience the message of the poem is directed to.

Grammar - There is no grammatical mistakes as far as my knowledge in grammar will allow me to see. It is beautifully written with no grammatical error.

In all, great poetry.
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM
alphawolf28
This rather an amazing way to tell a story of abuse through poetry (narrative poem).

Subject matter -
Like I always say, “a poet is one that can say what everyone is saying in an artistic way” and that is exactly what the poet did.

Abuse in marriage, one that is seen as normal by the society (this can be seen by the person’s mom's constant use of "a woman must be patient”), is very common subject almost every knows and talks about but the poet showed his/her artistic gifts by presenting this topic is a very unique way.

First the use of a narrative poetry. The story is very sad come to think of it and the poet has presented in a way that all throughout the reading, the reader will be convinced to empathize with these women who go through such abuse in marriage.

The effect - although the poet didn't suggest a way out of this ordeal should anyone find themselves in one neither did she bring a happy ending but with how is it presented, anyone who reads it finds a sense of relief (if they are in an abuse marriage themselves) or an urge to help do something about this issue.

That's a unique art the poet portrayed there.


Diction - the words in the poem couldn’t have been said in any different way than it was said.
The words were fit for the poem - not too difficult and not too simple which is ok for the kind of audience the message of the poem is directed to.

Grammar - There is no grammatical mistakes as far as my knowledge in grammar will allow me to see. It is beautifully written with no grammatical error.

In all, great poetry.
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM
alphawolf28
This rather an amazing way to tell a story of abuse through poetry (narrative poem).

Subject matter -
Like I always say, “a poet is one that can say what everyone is saying in an artistic way” and that is exactly what the poet did.

Abuse in marriage, one that is seen as normal by the society (this can be seen by the person’s mom's constant use of "a woman must be patient”), is very common subject almost every knows and talks about but the poet showed his/her artistic gifts by presenting this topic is a very unique way.

First the use of a narrative poetry. The story is very sad come to think of it and the poet has presented in a way that all throughout the reading, the reader will be convinced to empathize with these women who go through such abuse in marriage.

The effect - although the poet didn't suggest a way out of this ordeal should anyone find themselves in one neither did she bring a happy ending but with how is it presented, anyone who reads it finds a sense of relief (if they are in an abuse marriage themselves) or an urge to help do something about this issue.

That's a unique art the poet portrayed there.


Diction - the words in the poem couldn’t have been said in any different way than it was said.
The words were fit for the poem - not too difficult and not too simple which is ok for the kind of audience the message of the poem is directed to.

Grammar - There is no grammatical mistakes as far as my knowledge in grammar will allow me to see. It is beautifully written with no grammatical error.

In all, great poetry.
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM

2 comment[s] in part 2

lola
Very lovely poem. I feel it should have been arranged in stanzas, but it's still a nice piece
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM
miss_painite
This is simply beautiful. The last two lines got to me the most.
Friday, 14 Dec, 2018 00:00AM

1 comment[s] in part 10

lola
I loooooove this. I'll love to watch you perform this beautiful piece
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM

1 comment[s] in part 1

1 comment[s] in part 14

lola
The theme is very clear, talking about an act that is very paramount among Nigerian parents.

It's a good poem
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM

2 comment[s] in part 7

lola
Nice, I love the title
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM
ashiloveugbe
Awesome awesome poems by amazing poets...its
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM

1 comment[s] in part 3

drea20
This is amazing!!
Friday, 14 Dec, 2018 00:00AM

2 comment[s] in part 4

lola
Wow, nice perspective. I love this
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM
drea20
Cuter
Friday, 14 Dec, 2018 00:00AM

1 comment[s] in part 6

lola
Wow,I love the ryhmes. Great piece dear, it is like a perfect spoken word performance
Saturday, 15 Dec, 2018 00:00AM

3 comment[s]

paul
Okay
Friday, 25 Oct, 2019 17:45PM
paul
Pretty nice
Friday, 25 Oct, 2019 17:42PM
02e@CT#xW$zX%8K^NP&8n*96(R0)ZQ paul
Wow
Friday, 25 Oct, 2019 17:40PM